Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in childhood obesity, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent decades, the number of children with
has increased dramatically. While some people claim that the authority is responsible for the infants'
, others believe that children overweight is the parent's liable. In my opinion the latter approach appears more liable for infants. On the one hand, it is clear that government should take a responsibility the
in children because the human body requires a healthy diet. The main reason is the adulteration. Adulterated foods are attractive to people because these foods are really mouth watering
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As a result
, an unhealthy diet can cause various problems
as diabetes, cancer,
and heart disease etc.
For example
, a paper published by Dr Robert Watson, a world renowned specialist, reveals that the reason for infants'
is that more than 58% of children are eating fast-food in schools. Another problem, which is not taken by the authority, provides a healthy diet and regular exercise, more time for fun on school timetables and unhealthy junk food ban from school menus.
On the other hand
, parents should care about the weight of their children.
and foremost, the philosophy about everything begins from home, it makes sense that environment of homes reflects to children's habit.
For instance
, the overweight children have uncontrolled eating habit by their parents, so children prefer consuming unhealthy foods without knowing the dire effects to their body. These foods are attractive to children because they are cheap to buy and very easy to prepare.Nowadays, parents are quite busy with working, so they cannot manage well about their infant meal as they just provide some money to their children for having a lunch.
, children choose to lead a sedentary lifestyle, so they are not active enough.
In particular
, in their leisure time, they watch TV or go online as well as play video game
of doing outdoor activities. To sum up, both the government and parents can play an indispensable role in imitating children
and others disease. The government should regulate the food industry and parents should serve healthy home cooked meals, and encourage to play outdoor sports.
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