Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions ?

#governments #decisions #people’s #lifestyle #people

Nowadays among the people there is a debate regarding whether governments should interfere the people’s lifestyle. In my opinion

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governments should put some restrictions on people's action which threat the peace of society

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however

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they must not limit people's individual rights and

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the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints

freedoms

freedom

. On the one hand, no doubt

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there should be laws made by

government

to ensure the well-being of citizens living in a

counrty

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

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Because only in

this

way the existence of a peaceful society can be provided

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For example

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If there were no rules

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crimes

such

as theft

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murder could have

increase

Suggestion

increased

dramatically.

Therefore

the

government

should constrict on people's decisions affecting other's life.

On the other hand

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People should have

indiviual

a human being

individual

rights

such

as free to believing in the religion they want

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choosing the job they work or dressing the way they like

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Thus

this

sort of rights should not be limited

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by the

byte

government

as long as they do not affect anyone else

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Furthermore

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These kind of individual freedoms must be ensured by the

government

, like laws.Because people can not be happy without having freedom which is the

first

claim that people must have

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In conclusion,

Government

Suggestion

the Government

can put some restrictions on people's

lifestyle

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lifestyle, however, this

lifestyle, however this

however

this

should not be in individual rights. Because in order to provide peaceful society

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people need both be protected by someone else and have freedom.

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Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions ?

Your opinion

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6/2 In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The technology allowed us to have more ways to communicate. However, some people say that the internet and social network create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line of respect and appropriateness. To what extent do you agree?

Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school. I would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men and possibly women.

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in oder to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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