There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring your attention
on
issues with the Change preposition
to
bus
service is operated by the transportation department. Over two weeks services are not on time
As I mentioned that ,the Use synonyms
bus
driver is responsible for my resign Use synonyms
to
being reached late at the office. The Change preposition
from
bus
driver is running the Use synonyms
bus
30 minutes behind the schedule which results were reached Use synonyms
office
30 minutes late and that affects my work performance.The seats are torn in a Correct article usage
the office
bus
that result, our clothes get stained and which looks embarrassed.
I requestUse synonyms
to
the transport department to take prompt action regarding my concern. So the problem we are facing will resolve soon. By reaching on time at Change preposition
apply
work place
help us perform better and the seat should be replaced or repaired so that, our clothes remain stained free.
I hope you take my complaint as seriously and take strict actions to resolve issues Correct your spelling
workplace
andin
we will never face the problem again in future.
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and
and in
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
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Yours
abc
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite