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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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It is thought by many there is a huge growth in the sales of car in
last
 three decades.
As a result
 traffic congestion becomes the problem in across the world.
This
 essay will highlight the effective solutions to mitigate
this
 issue. To overcome
this
 subject there are a few steps which need to be taken by the government.
Firstly
, the government should develop public transportation and improves the quality of
this
 sector. Native people should feel convenient while using
this
 facility, frequent busses should me allowed in the areas which motivates them to use it.
Moreover
, reduce the fare of public transport which brings massive result in using public transport since
this
 approach encourages the people who often travel like employees and students.
Secondly
, as we have seen that many people have two or three vehicles in their home. Authorities need to seize their cars and imposed heavy charge on them using more motors.
This
 step makes them compel to take the facility of public transport.
In addition
, many automobile companies launching different varieties of cars in each month at low budget.
For example
, the Tata motors organisation has introduced the Nano car only in 25,000 which attracted to public and compelled them to purchase.
Such
 companies should be warned and impose heavy tax on them. There would be a limit on the production of cars or the ministry should encourage those companies to introduce an electric cars which are environment free and easy to move without creating traffic jams. To recapitulate,
this
 essay highlighted the best medium for
this
 problem which should be initiated by the government which brings colourful results.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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