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some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life. to what extent do you agree?

#people #children #sex #schools #life
Nowadays both genders have been provided the equal right at every place
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The section of society feels that it will have a drawback in
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the future
 if teenagers pursue their education with same genders
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I completely agree that it definitely will impact by various ways like
perfessionsl
 wise and personally if girls will finish their education in those institutions where martial status is same
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Firstly
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girls
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the girls
 will not overcome the shyness if they complete their degrees with
same
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the same sex
sex
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In the global world males and females are working together to perform better at various places
in corporates
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in corporate
incorporates
 or production houses
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Many times both
sex
 meet with each other to pursue firm's business dealings by holding common conservations
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 It could be possible only on those
cases if
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cases, if
 there is not any hesitation barrier among them. To illustrate, many countries could not grow in term of business
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since they do not allow ladies to work globally so that global opportunities could be explored
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Apparently
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 it is impacting the nation overall growth
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Secondly
, if hesitation gap will not be reduced between them
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 It will
also
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 the relation
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 like father will not be understand an issue of a mother
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For example
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 a report published by
Haryana government
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the Haryana government
 that every year
jatt
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Jatt
just
 caste family
kill
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kills
 the 20 percent women because they expressed the willingness towards the jobs
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 which
this
 community does not want
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Therefore
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 both
sex
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sexes
 will not be able to know better to each other and may commit offence on any small issue
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 In conclusion, no any kingdom can run successfully if they focus the growth of single
sex
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Sociey
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
Society
 needs to reduce the discrimination among them to grow overall
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