Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern society, some people have been believing that it is not too important children learn about handwriting because of the advantage of technology that people have been typing more than writing.
For instance
, I tend to agree with some points and
this
essay will show the reason.
Firstly
, I strongly believe that in no ways technology have been changing the way thing work in the world and with new features like artificial intelligence we will change and we need accustoms to
this
. Of course, I believe handwriting it is important and we need to learn that, but we cannot miss the fact that our children need to learn typing better to be a successful professional.
Although
some people worried that the way things have been changing, it is important for the world and with
this
, our children need more dedication to learn a lot of things.
In addition
, when our children will start to work they need to type very well.
However
, the fact of typing does not take away handwriting. In my opinion,
both
are extremely necessary and everybody needs to be good. Nowadays it is common teachers in the school just focus on handwriting, but in the past, the year's thing will change and children will learn
both
together. To conclude,
both
are important in the development of our children and we need to encourage the educational system to focus on
both
.
Moreover
, we need things outside of the box and see how
both
are important for our children and we need to support them.
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