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A person can be assessed on how well they organize’.Some people often say that it is highly essential to maintain one’s environment neat and organised.I completely agree with

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perspective and

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essay shall accommodate my view.

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with, keeping things in order at

home

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and

workplace

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reduces stress and increases credibility. People often find it stressful to search for things in a

home

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and for necessary files in an office when these places are full of clutter.

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, it was nerve-racking on many occasions when

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could not find my car keys instantly.

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, being organized improves one’s image amongst colleagues at the

workplace

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and friends. People tend to take a systemised person seriously and can be as an intelligent person. A recent study of the University of Buckingham reported that people who are well organized are respected and believed more amongst their peers. So, It is irrefutable that keeping things in the places they are supposed to be, help in maintaining a stress free life and

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increases trustworthiness.

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, some people opine that organizing is not that supreme because of the

time

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constraint. In today’s fast-paced world some people don't find enough

time

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to just set up things either at

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or at the

workplace

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, one of my friends has a ten hour work schedule daily, including her part

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job and could not find enough

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to sort out things. But

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cases can easily be taken care of by hiring a

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organizer or so and

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can be maintained

accordingly

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. To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, organizing is helpful in reducing clutter and pressure. What is more, it is

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proved to be efficient in improving and improvising.Admittedly, It is highly advisable to maintain

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and

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neat and tidy.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

301 words

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Some :People say it is lrnport�{Jt to kfJep y�ur hoine and your workplace tidy, with everything organised a�d in the'correct place. What is your opinion about.this

Include an introduction and conclusion

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