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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is often considered by some that the
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 of highways will be enhanced when the highest speed limit on vehicles is reduced while others are of the opinion that that there are better alternatives. In my view, I believe there are superior ways to ensure
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 of roads as they are more practical and effective. On one hand, some people feel that
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 travel will be safer if there is no provision for over speeding in the speedometer of automobiles.
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 persons think that the highest cause of accidents is too much speeding of drivers.
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, while it is imperative that driving should be interesting, driving at maximum speed makes the
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to lose
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lose
 control when there is a sudden reason to apply the
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a braking device consisting of a combination of interacting parts that work to slow a motor vehicle
brakes
 of his
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.
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, if every
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vehicle
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 is designed in
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 a way that the highest speed limits are removed, no
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 will be tempted to over speed.
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, others are of the view that there are better options
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 ensuring
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safety
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 and I agree.
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 accidents have so many causes that should be given proper attention. An important way of reducing auto crash is by educating
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 users and providing workshops to make sure the basic principles of driving are well understood.
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, officers in charge of the
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 should make sure that drivers have
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driver's license
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a driver's license
 before they can be permitted to use any automobile.
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, in Nigeria, it is an offence for a
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 to use a
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 without having the necessary permit.
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, drivers are admonished not to use alcoholic beverages when in motion as
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 can cause a fatal accident. In conclusion, while people vary in their opinion, I think there are better alternatives to ensure
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safety
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 like educating
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 users.
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