Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, children have

tendency

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a tendency

the tendency

to spend too much of their

time

on

computer

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the computer

. While some hold the belief that the phenomenon has no harmful influence on youngsters, others state

that is

problematic. I think that both are of equal importance.

To begin

with, the merits of using computers are widely admitted. One of

main advantages

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the main advantages

is that high-tech tools, computers encourage young children to use their leisure

time

to expand their knowledge. To specify, diversified methods, like animated websites or interactive software designed for inspiring them to effectively obtain more information.

This

can be exemplified by my nephew; he spends hours accessing to computers and learning about dinosaurs.

Moreover

, that through the

computer

screens providing with apps to make friends

,

Accept space

,

chat rooms and social network can give youngsters countless chance to discover new ones whom they can share the same interest all over the world.

For example

, joining Facebook can promote young people establish a wide circle of virtual friends.

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks when children devote too much

time

to playing electronic games

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playing electronic games

or using the Internet.

First

of all, it is essential that children should do exercises for their development

instead

of keeping their clue to

computer screen

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the computer screen

. The young generation can’t maintain a healthy lifestyle, unless they play sports or take outside activities.

Secondly

, young children who are over-reliant on computers, especially video games may lose concentration on studying and have trouble in communicating with their classmates.

Thirdly

, waves from hi-fi devices

also

can cause headaches and potential sicknesses if used for too long.

For instance

, teenage video game addicts died from

stroke

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a stroke

caused by overnight session. In conclusion, there are different views expressed that the young who daily use

computers whether

Accept comma addition

computers, whether

is useful or not;

however

, I do believe that has its own the advantages and disadvantages. Yet, parents could limit children’s

time

using

computer

and make use of it in order for their kids to develop themselves.