Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Today, making more money by sportsmen than workers from significant calling is a hotly debated topic. Some people think it is

unjusted but

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ingested, but

ingested but

another disagrees. There are strong arguments in favour of both opinions. I

personaly

as yourself

personally

think that crucial professions should be paid more salary. There are several professional sports where players earn too much money than it should be

particular

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particularly

football players. It is

unexplicable

incapable of being explained or accounted for

inexplicable

why they have so great salaries. They are not saving people's

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

or staving off the

banes

a percussion instrument consisting of a pair of hollow pieces of wood or bone (usually held between the thumb and fingers) that are made to click together (as by Spanish dancers) in rhythm with the dance

bones

. Their work is like a hobby.

On the other hand

the life of

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the professional

a professional

is not so fabulous as they could think. They are working out 7 days a week. They dedicate their

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lives

to

sport

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the sport

and repeatedly the players sustain different injuries. It is certainly true that many crucial professions are not so high-paid,

although

their job does a world of good. The obvious

example can

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example, can

be doctors and other

healthy

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health

staffs. There are some reasons to pay them better. They treat people, make surgeries sometimes during several hours, they often are on duty.

However they

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However, they

become low salary. Another good example could be firemen. They handle fire, save people, their houses, their property.

In contrast

with professionals their work is not so

worthful

causing hurt

hurtful

youthful

. In conclusion, I believe the situation will change one day. It would be more justified if significant jobs were paid more than all sports professionals.