Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is true that there are fewer people who less fit daily than previously
,
Accept space
,
despite of the improving of sport equipment. There are various reasons for
this
trend, but some steps which can be taken to remedy the problems On the one hand, two main that people have lost the habit of working out.
Firstly
, they have concentrated much time on their work and studies.
For example
, nine-to-five job has made people more busy because after work-time they come back home with many housework
such
as taking care their children and preparing the dinner.
Secondly
, not all of them can afford for gyms or sport facilities. Most of population in the world are a young age who just have finished a probationary period. So they do not have a financial ability to pay for sport centre because it is quite expensive.
On the other hand
, there are some measure that could be implemented to encourage people to do activities.
First
of all, the Internet should be used to make people escape their sedentary lifestyle. Unless they pay for gyms, they can learn the online fitness course, because its quality as well as offline course.
For instance
, nowadays, some fitness app in a smartphone is free which have an AI personal trainer instructing people to train properly.
Additionally
, the government should communicate about the important of doing exercise and run some campaigns.
For example
, running together are organized on weekly that attract many people. In conclusion, some reasons why people are not working out can be identified, but some solution can be applied to encourage them more concerned about their physical health.
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