Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case ? Is it a good thing or a bad thing ?

Wearing fashionable clothes
is liked
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are liked
by many people. Nowadays, they are encouraged to purchase more on buying fashion items than in the past. I personally believe that the negative consequences of
this
lifestyle surpass its probable advantages. Obviously, citizens are pushed to spend their money on buying clothes and fashion items. Before, we only heard, saw advertisements on radio, television. But now, we can see them everywhere: on the street, train station, laptop, on some towers which have advertisements board, even on social media,... So people can easily see and approach them. In the past, there were not many fashion brands like now. Another factor is that consumers have access to more variety of styles and brands than before. Competition between different international companies has led them to generate more different brands with specific logos.
As a result
, people have more options to select their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
style, brands, and suitable for their pockets. From my point of view,
this
can have more drawbacks. The
first
reason is that individuals may forget quality. Some people would choose a shirt from a famous brand which costs twice as much as the one that has better quality and prices. Because they think that buying expensive items, clothes from a famous brand can make them look more fashionable. Some teenagers spend their money on buying
unnecessary expensive
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unnecessary, expensive
clothes, items, so they can't even afford their medical and electric bills.
Furthermore
, some people want to look
fashionable but
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fashionable, but
it may not suitable in some cases.
For example
, you attend a formal
meeting but
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meeting, but
you wear shorts which are not suitable at a meeting. In conclusion, wearing fashionable clothes is not
bad but
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bad, but
it has some drawbacks which can affect our
life
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lives
.
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