Tourism is encouraged in many countries .Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country.

In
contemporary era
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the contemporary era
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a lot of nations rely on tourism as it
become
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becomes
a source of capital
,
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,
so every nation has hearten it
.
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Although
it is
advanteous
giving an advantage
advantageous
adventurous
for manifold
reasonsThough
its demerits can not be overlooked
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As
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
concerned
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that
this
is certainly advantageous
,
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despite a few inevitable downsides. There are multifarious perquisites of tourism
for
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in
a country.
First
and foremost is it uplift the economic structures
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To be elaborated
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,
for visiting
reowned
destinations sightseers must have to lay out
staggering amount
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a staggering amount
of money to afford entry tickets which
consequently
boost up national as well as local earnings
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Secondly
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it provides innumerable
recuitment
the act of getting recruits; enlisting people for the army (or for a job or a cause etc.)
recruitment
opportunities
to
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for
provincial community
.
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To cite an example
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jaipur
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Jaipur
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the largest city of of Rajasthan state in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
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also
know as
pink city
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the pink city
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as it is popular among people all over the world for manifold monuments and destinations
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namely Amer fort
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Jantar Mantar
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Hawa Mahaland other mind blowing buildings
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Subsequently
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there are multitude guides for guiding visitors about the history of
such
places
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Moreover
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it
also lead
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also leads
to construction of motels
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barsand
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bars and
restraunts
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
to offer each and every facility to trippers.
Therefore
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all these factors hike collections and provide engagement to local masses.
Additionally
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,
it
represent
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represents
the culture and traditions of a nation
alround
in the area or vicinity
around
the globe as
enormouus
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
arrived from varied corners of the earth.
Nevertheless
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as every coin has two faces
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likewise
if there are pros
then
no doubt cons
also
there
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.
prime
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Prime
drawback is that it destruct and pollute the
enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
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.
When visitors
enterd
to come or go into
entered
enter
interred
in
such
monuments along with foodstuff and other
eatbles
suitable for use as food
eatables
tables
then
after utilizing all those they
thriw
propel through the air
throw
empty water bottles and wrappers on the floor
,
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,
which contaminate the atmosphere.Even
overfllowing
covered with water
overflowing
of trippers on these
sights
the piece of land on which something is located (or is to be located)
sites
also
harm the monuments and it might vanish the records and stories of the
cuture
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
from the walls of
building
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buildings
the building
a building
whuch
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
were
architectured
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the architecture
architecture
in
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of
ancient time period
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the ancient time period
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Finally it
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Finally, it
also lead
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also leads
to
illegall
prohibited by law or by official or accepted rules
illegal
activities like robberies
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,
as there are manifold expensive statues and jewellery
,
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,
populance
people in general considered as a whole
populace
get allured and do
such
activies
any specific behavior
activities
To draw the curtain
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
pen down by saying that
altough
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
there are
kean
having or demonstrating ability to recognize or draw fine distinctions
keen
hinderance
something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress
hindrance
of tourism like destruction and contamination
,
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,
yet strong points overweigh the
darksides
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dark sides
as it uplift national and local financial gain
abd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
also
introduce disparate people to
ones
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one
one's
nation
.
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