At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large amount numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In the recent days, the
youth
such
aas
young adults are greater in population in the to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
world
, however
, there is a decrease in the senior citizens in the world
. This
essay is an attempt to evaluate, wheater
the merits introduces two alternatives
whether
outweight
the demerits or not.
be heavier than
outweigh
To begin
with, youth
plays a significantly in the development of world
. They are gaining knowledge in the field of education and advanced technology. Suggestion
the world
Similarly
, young adults are contributing in
the development of the economy. Suggestion
to
Thus
, higher the youth
power, any country can gain wealth for the country. For instance
, a survey conducted by the Oxford univesity
, has Suggestion
Univesity
university
releaved
that most of the developed countries have (of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear
relieved
released
numberof
adults than senior adults.
On the other hand
, the experience gained by senior people over the years cannot be over-looked. Young people can learn from senior people and not to make any mistakes. Moreover
, youth
must follow the rules of the elder people, which motivates younger one and also
reduce the mistakes. For Example
, an interview conducted by well know company Infosys, thirty percent of the adult senior have been recruited for the higher benefits. Thus
, they have been well known of the facts and factors of the corporate world
, hence
youth
learn from them.
To summarize, despite the fact that the elder people have their own place in the society and the corporate world
, youth
is the future of the world
. Thus by
looking both sides, it can be concluded that Accept comma addition
Thus, by
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
outweight
drawbacks.be heavier than
outweigh
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
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- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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