Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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While most of us would agree that we should remedy global warming and other environmental issues, opinions were split on what
solution
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the solution
should be employed. Some believe that the government should discourage the use of car other vehicles by putting a heavy tax on traditional
fuel
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. Indeed, in my opinion,
this
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is the most effective way to tackle some of the environmental problem we had.
First
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and foremost, it is apparent that pollutant emitted by
vehicals
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
constitude
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constitutes
constitute
constituted
a major part of air pollution in our country.
In particular
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, old model private cars release three times more sulphate than the
contempory
characteristic of the present
contemporary
one. Since the collapse of the oil price, private car sales have been triple. There is no doubt that the popularity of car uses is linked to
fuel
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pricing
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prices
, and the
governemnt
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
could reverse
this
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trend by inflating the
fuel
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price. It is highly probable that
this
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policy would decrease the number of cars on
roads
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the roads
,
thus
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improve the air quality and reduce carbon
emittion
expel (gases or odors)
emitting
.
Moreover
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, increasing the cost of transportation with fossil
fuel
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would create an incentive for cooperation to switch to other
more environmental
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more environmentally
friendly alternatives,
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as electric trucks and rails. These means of transportation consume electricity
instead
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of burning fuels which produce pollutant during the process.
Although
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most of the electricity productions nowadays still depend on
buring
the act of burning something
burning
fossil
fuel
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, they produce a lot less
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
gasses compared to
vehicals
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
. In conclusion, we should expect that the increase of
fuel
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price would lead to cities with less
fuel
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buring
the act of burning something
burning
vehical
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicle
vehicles
and a shift towards
eletric
using or providing or producing or transmitting or operated by electricity
electric
vehical
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
.
As a result
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of
this
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policy, the air pollution problem should be significantly reduced and we should able to a decline in global carbon emission.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental preservation
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Green technologies
  • Alternative energy sources
  • Renewable energy
  • Fuel-efficient vehicles
  • Electric vehicles (EVs)
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic impact
  • Consumer behavior
  • Disproportionate effect
  • Government subsidies
  • Comprehensive policies
  • Cost-effective solutions
  • Carbon footprint reduction
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