Nowadays more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the adventages of this trend for individuals overweigh its disadventages for the environment?

In a hectic world today, people more tend to have their own cars and use them for reaching their destination.

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it is convenient to have

personal vehicle

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a personal vehicle

to move while there are alternatives for them,

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brings irreversible harms to the environment causing pollution. Because of

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detriments, the aforementioned trend seems

inacceptable

not adequate to give satisfaction

unacceptable

to me. From one angle, the purchase and owning of transport for individuals would comfort to the owners. It can be eased the process of the transportation from one point to another only by turning on the engine. As can be seen, there is no need to wait for the other analogies of the transporting equipment.

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,

ruling

uttered with a trill

rolling

the car, an individual can select and change the routine and control the speed by himself.

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, an owner is able to choose the shortest way and drive faster to get the indicated place. From another angle, the more cars are bought and driven, the more the

air

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condition is polluted. So,

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downside does not let me think that purchasing

car

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a car

the car

for individual purposes is better. Huge numbers of private cars, which can be replaced with public ones, exhaust gases comprising toxic fumes

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in

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air

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affecting to atmosphere negatively.

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The intoxicated air circumstance

air

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circumstance of the Tokyo city can be best paradigm here to illustrate the issue. The population of

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city is obliged to wear masks so as not to breathe from contaminated

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and to filter it. To conclude, using their own cars can benefit

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for

people bringing convenience in terms of transportation.

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,

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tendency contributes to the worsening of the surrounded environment and erases the advantages. For

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reason, I believe that automobiles must be used less.