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Sometimes people think that

happiness

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depends on individuals and they are the only who responsible for it

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however others

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however, others

think that pleasure relies on some other factors To what extent do we believe in

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preceding all others in time or space or degree

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, we want to ask ourselves what

happiness

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is.

Happiness

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is that feeling when you feel content and be satisfied with your life

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When you have all your needs and achieve your dreams and desires. Some people think that

happiness

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depends on individuals.

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, when you eat your delicious, favourite meal or when you have a good time playing your favourite sport.

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, some find

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in travelling to someplace. One of my friends always tells me that he finds

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when he spends a lot of time playing computer games. My grandpa once tells me that

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can be found in forgiveness and giving.

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, some people say that

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happiness not

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happiness, not

only depends on

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on other factors like the environment around us. When my child birthday comes, he feels so happy because of the presents I bring him. Some people like to stay where they can enjoy

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calmness and see the beauty of nature

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They find their

happiness

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in these places. When I ask some people about what makes them happy. They told me that money is the main source of

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Others find

happiness

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in making new friends and have good relations with their community. Good relations can put them in the mood

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In my opinion, I think I am the only person who can make the necessary changes to live a happy and fulfilled life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

273 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Humanitarian relief
Infrastructure
Global solidarity
Disproportionately
External assistance
Rebuilding efforts
Disaster response
Investment in stability
Dependency theory
Responsible intervention
Paternalistic
Shared humanity
Sovereignty
Capabilities
Fatality rates

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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the number of arrests per year for using illegal drugs between 1991 to 2005.

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