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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or coeducational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

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It is argued that it has
disbenefits
 to children studying in single-gender schools in the future
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This
 essay agrees with
this
 statement because a role of boys and girls in education is very important
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Also
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relationship
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the relationship
 between two
gender
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genders
 should be close since childhood
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 Both genders play very significant role in
scholing
the act of teaching at school
schooling
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 Girls always help boys in any time
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 when they write control work and if boys have weakness in one
site
a group of things of the same kind that belong together and are so used
set
 of lessons
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This
 invaluable support may determine their life
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 Simultaneously
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 it influences to girls
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 While the lesson as
phisical
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
 culture or technology girls can study with aid of boys
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 who are very vocational in these sites
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 Recent research concluded that well-known businessman Bill Gates used to study at school well
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That is
 because girls constantly helped him during the lessons
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 The bond between males and females should be close from early years
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 When both genders have established close relationship
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 they are able to find their love easily
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Also
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 they would know
character
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the character
 of each other
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 it means that when someone knows other gender's temperament a mindset can be improved
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 It is one of the most crucial aspect of studying at
common schools
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the common schools
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 Students of
school
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the school
 where separate classes are not able to enhance their world outlook
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 I think
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 A recent study found that graduates of single-sex school fail to start their life with another person nowadays
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 In conclusion
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 giving education in gender-specific schools is
unfavorable
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
 for children in their future because their assistance
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to
 each other
at
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in
 the schools is priceless and their friendship will help them forever
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