Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, governments pay partly or all education fees. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Education

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is a precious commodity that people of all age

group

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groups

aspire to achieve. The higher the standards of

education

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, the costlier it gets. In some countries,

for example

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Australia, citizens enjoy the benefits of the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

paying the

education

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fees in

advance while

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advance, while

in some countries no

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help is provided.

This

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creates

strain

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a strain

on their personal finances as well as their parents.

Education

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has now become a

pricely

having a high price

pricey

commodity to hold, but it is

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a commodity that everyone should be entitled to despite having financial difficulties. Countries

such

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as Australia has come up with a scheme where student of all races

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or financial backgrounds are allowed to go to

schools

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school

, fully subsidised by the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

without causing monetary strains towards themselves or their parents.

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, most

asian

a native or inhabitant of Asia

Asian

countries do not carry out

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practices. Fees for their local students are

subsided but

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subsided, but

school fees

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have

to be made before

enrollment

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is allowed.

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Singapore where

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Singapore, where

university fees have to be paid

upfront

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up front

, poor income students are usually neglected the opportunity or have to partake in multiple jobs while studying.

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of allowing the child to be focusing on their

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education their

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education, their

attention has to be split onto worrying about school fees. While being gifted the opportunity to be granted free

education

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there is

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a debate whether when provided with

education

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treasure the opportunity provided to them, or would they take it for granted. Students working hard to pay for

enrollment

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usually would fully utilise

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moments as they understand the value for each dollar they have spent and would work hard towards reaching their maximum potential. When asked, if

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

should pay for

education

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, I would strongly support that motion as

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feel that every student should have the equal right to

education

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and not be stopped of gaining it due to financial constraints.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

312 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

access to education
financial burden
education quality
equal opportunities
investment in human capital
economic development
cost burden
misuse of funds
motivation
perform well
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