Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People often say that “human beings cannot survive four days without water or cannot go for more than three weeks without food”. These days, it seems to be easily transformed into “human beings cannot live within four minutes without their smartphones”. We are living in an era when there is little doubt that modern technology has revolutionized our daily lives and

work

. One of the greatest innovations that contributes to that usefulness is the

smartphone

, a gadget which had been facilitating people for a long time. There is likely a number of reasons pertaining to

this

imminent issue, tracing the roots of the scenario that people are overusing their smartphones directs us to the fact that

mobile phone

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the mobile phone

has become a must-have device for so many people in the world. Owing to the requirement to regularly be online for their

work

or

study

, these days, obtaining an effective

smartphone

using for

work

and

study

will be a privilege for many people. A pertinent example in point would be during the pandemic caused by Coronavirus in 2020, there is no denying that people have

obligation

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an obligation

the obligation

obligations

to stick to their

smartphone

or other technological devices to have their

work

done at home.

Smartphone

tends to be more preferred on account of its portable feature and easy-to-use functions. Another plausible reason should

also

be responsible is, gradually,

smartphone

has replaced almost every other entertaining device and become the most considerably effective technological innovation for entertainment purposes. Evidence for

this

statement would be the fact that currently, there are mainly very few of radios or music players selling in the market compared to the past.

Additionally

, the developers for

smartphone operation system

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the smartphone operation system

have put lots of efforts to bring so many applications not only for listening to music, watching

movies but

Accept comma addition

movies, but

also

for

study

new things

such

as playing instruments or cooking on the

smartphone

. Despite the convenience that

smartphone

brought to our society, in my opinion, the persistence of overusing

this

kind of technological development has rendered immense negative consequences and foremost of which is the disruption it creates during people’s daily

work

. Incidentally, beside those wonderful apps for working,

study

; those apps serving entertainment purposes seem to be addicted to many people. In the main, I believe more than a handful of people experienced the time that they

endeavored

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavoured

to rest for five minutes on their

smartphone

during their works and it turned out to be two hours or more.

Furthermore

, irreparable worry had been brought about by spending time on

smartphone

too much owing to the fact it affected harmfully on our health condition. One of those is the short-sighted disease which occurs in so many adolescents these days because they constantly look at the screen of

smartphone

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a smartphone

smart phone

. What is more, scientific research suggests that human who do not

exposure

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expose

to

smartphone

for so many hours per day tend to have a more robust constitution that the one who does. It is probably due to the erroneous conception of some people who think using

smartphone

to surf the internet is relaxed;

however

, from my own knowledge, the tasks people do on

smartphone

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a smartphone

the smartphone

for entertaining are

also

arduous activities for their brains cause it requires brains to assess a multitude of information.

Subsequently

weighing all the aforementioned, it is undeniable that there are many appropriate reasons for

smartphone

to become one of

greatest inventions

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the greatest inventions

of human beings which help us enormously in

this

society.

However

, abusing

smartphone

can be safely stated that it is a social concern that could not be trivialized and need to be alleviated before

its

the thing named or in question

it

damages go any

further

in today’s society.