Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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rate plays a vital role in maintaining law and order situation of any place. . Some people are of the

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that,

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in order

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rates it is essential to give longer prison time

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offenders.

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, others believe that there are other ways of decreasing

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essay, I shall discuss both viewpoints. In my

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jail time should depend on

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the nature

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in my essay. Advocates of more prison time are of

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opinion

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because, they believe that keeping offenders in lockups will reduce the

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as they will not have the opportunity to offend. One

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to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

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serious crimes like sex offenders or terrorists should be behind bars as they are

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it is true that some crimes are very serious others,

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, might be less

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stealing or using fake identity etc.

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crimes should be met with lesser punishment and alternative ways like skill training will provide them with an opportunity to earn money without

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perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

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. Another way is to give good behaviour bonds to people, through

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they prove that they have deviated from their old ways they can be released back into the community. To conclude, In my

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the jail term should depend on

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the severity

of the

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committed. As some criminals are too dangerous to be out in the community, while others who have

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small acts of breaking the law, should be given another chance to start over, by providing new skill training and behaviour managing

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