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Some people say that the most important requirement of a modern city is an effective public transport systems. While other people believe that there are other important requirements for a city. Discuss both views, give your opinion.

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The chart provides details about 3 types of exports in
Someland
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Some land
 in 2005,2015
,
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and projections
after
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over
 10 years, and exports show by billions. Overall, we can see immediately there were substantial differences in the proportion of main exports between 2005 and 2015-2025. The biggest
export
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 difference is international tourism, but the least productive
export
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 will report
meat
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 products in 2025.
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export
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 is
meat
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 products which
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are
 4%, whereas a moderate drop during the 10 years and stood at approximately 2.8%. The lowest products of main exports will be
meat
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 products with just over 2.5% in 2025. Dairy products and International tourism spent more money than
meat
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 products during the period, and the graph shows almost all reports increased continuously. Dairy products
was
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were
have been
 around 4.5% in 2005 which increased substantially to around 7.9% in 2015 and got the highest point. The
last
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 of
export
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 and which the biggest of sum of exports is
international tourism
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an international tourism
 that stood at about 6.2% in 2005. There was a minimal increase
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of
 6.5% in 2015.
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Although
, it will peak at a little less than 8% in 2025.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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