People ’s character is influenced by environment rather than genetics. Do you agree or disagree?

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the past decades, human

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

was affected by two main factors as environmental and

genetics

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genetic

. I strongly believe that it was influenced by

environment

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more than genetics. There are numerous reasons that human

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

has achieved

from

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by

people who surround us.

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of all, parents are mirrored for their children to follow. In process children's development, children will not be aware of the

issue so

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issue, so

the way of teaching by parents will be important, if parents show

to

being one more than one

two

good sides which is

lead

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leading

to their character's children will be at positive view.

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, friends, teachers are

also

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evident to contribute to the shape of human

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

.

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, parents try to rent or buy a house in wholesome area away crime-ridden in the hope that their children will not be amid bad influence and equip their children with negative

environment

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. Another compelling reason is that there is undoubtedly

influence

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influenced

of the

environment

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and natural more obvious and convincing than genetics. Like instance, everyone has their own DNA except for identifying twins who share

same DNA

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the same DNA

and they have all same physical appearance but

their

in or at that place

there

have different characters. In fact, the rural twin is hard-working, taciturn but the urban twin is quite opposite, his personality is talkative and

out-going

leaving a place or a position

outgoing

, temperamental.

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, human personality is

also

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gained

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from

culture,

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, in comparison to sensual aspects of Asian people and Western people, characters of Asian are not shown loving action to somebody in the

public but

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public, but

totally opposite with Western people, they express loving action with their lovers even in the public area. All those arguments lead to the conclusion that the

environment

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has more contribute to shape of individuals than genes.

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With

deep, the influence of natural into human characters is

significant

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significantly

powerful.