People ’s character is influenced by environment rather than genetics. Do you agree or disagree?
n
the past decades, human Suggestion
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behavior
was affected by two main factors as environmental and manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
genetics
. I strongly believe that it was influenced by Suggestion
genetic
environment
more than genetics.
There are numerous reasons that human behavior
has achieved manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
from
people who surround us.Suggestion
by
First
of all, parents are mirrored for their children to follow. In process children's development, children will not be aware of the issue so
the way of teaching by parents will be important, if parents show Accept comma addition
issue, so
to
good sides which is being one more than one
two
lead
to their character's children will be at positive view. Suggestion
leading
In addition
, friends, teachers are also
evident to contribute to the shape of human behavior
. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
For example
, parents try to rent or buy a house in wholesome area away crime-ridden in the hope that their children will not be amid bad influence and equip their children with negative environment
.
Another compelling reason is that there is undoubtedly influence
of the Suggestion
influenced
environment
and natural more obvious and convincing than genetics. Like instance, everyone has their own DNA except for identifying twins who share same DNA
and they have all same physical appearance but Suggestion
the same DNA
their
have different characters. In fact, the rural twin is hard-working, taciturn but the urban twin is quite opposite, his personality is talkative and in or at that place
there
out-going
, temperamental. leaving a place or a position
outgoing
Furthermore
, human personality is also
gained by
culture, Suggestion
from
Likewise
, in comparison to sensual aspects of Asian people and Western people, characters of Asian are not shown loving action to somebody in the public but
totally opposite with Western people, they express loving action with their lovers even in the public area.
All those arguments lead to the conclusion that the Accept comma addition
public, but
environment
has more contribute to shape of individuals than genes. In
deep, the influence of natural into human characters is Suggestion
With
significant
powerful.Suggestion
significantly
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