Countries are becoming more and more similar because of people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Technology is the sum of skills and processes used in the production of services that has brought us so many differences and in the lives of the world’s society as well and
also
bringing many good benefits to our humankind and developments in the world but it also bring
disadvantages to the people especially students nowadays. Suggestion
also brings
has also brought
Firstly
, the machinery has provided students and teachers with more details than the way of learning in the past time, but now we have only just got access to the lesson and doing cast studies of the updated new automation nowadays and students could easily learn at home or anywhere with clear information. Moreover
, technology also
causing the negative effects on the studying environment for students. For instance
, online classes now are happening in the world for students and teachers because of the Covid-19 virus is spreading everywhere in the whole planet and we have not yet found out the vaccine cure for people so the world had decided to make online classes or home schooling with technology instead
of going to school. So now some of the students are caused the laziness and copying the source from the internet and not doing their homework on their own ideas and knowledge. However
, students can possibly plagiarize the source from the internet. In conclusion, technology is very helpful for students for learning and it is valuable and give lots of advantages for people, but we also
believe that the internet is harmful for student by causing the laziness and plagiarism.Submitted by Rothana Chamroeun on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite