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some people say that children should stay in school until the age of 18. Others suggest that educating children until the age of 14 is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Education of children is vitally important for their future and developing as a person. Some people state that children's education should be until the age of 14, while others believe they should be taught until the age of 18. I agree with the latter opinion as nowadays it is getting difficult acquiring basic
knowledge
. School is the only beginning of the education system and children should try to acquire basic
knowledge
 as early as possible to be ready for other learning journeys. Due to that reason, Parents
also
 are trying to give their children to
schools
Suggestion
school
 earlier than before and pursuing to finish school before 14 years old.
For example
, the
last
 BBC report states that many people that want to finish school earlier and start their career journey are increasing day by day and parents are supporting them.
This
 is a clear indication of changing people’s desire to learn and grow as early as possible. But it can be difficult learning a lot of
knowledge
 at their young age and sometimes schools’ curriculum includes more than 2 new languages.
This
 trend is getting popular among modern private schools to give them more
knowledge
 than usual children. But it might be a challenging task to learn different languages and trying to acquire basic
knowledge
 of various fields at the same time.
For example
, we can see most of the young people who drop their schools because of the pressure that they are getting from their teachers and the environment. Overall, finishing a school program earlier might be useful for children to gain a lot of
knowledge
 and start their career path but the pressure that they are getting can be a dreadful effect on them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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