It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.

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Suggestion

It

is thought by some people that, talent help individual to be successful in the area like sports and music

whiile

a period of indeterminate length (usually short) marked by some action or condition

while

others believe that with effective teaching method and practice

anyoe

any person

anyone

can be a better

athelete

a person trained to compete in sports

athlete

and musician. Both views will be

analyzed

examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts

analysed

and opinion will be provided at the end. On the one hand, it is undeniable that, some people born with some certain talents which differentiate them with other who are trying to be better and who already become successful. These natural instinct help

indiviual

Suggestion

individuals

individual

overcome some stage while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

find it very difficult to pass.

For example

, there are some techniques that can't be taught doesn't matter how qualified a mentor is or how frequently a person practice.

On the other hand

, our education system based on a way that every individual can be taught things equally and effectively. Hardworking and regular exercise can take a student to the peak of the success and we have

plently

a full supply

plenty

of evidence to support that view.

For instance

, many pupils are successful today because of precise guidance and their perseverance. In my opinion, there is no doubt that natural instinct

put

Suggestion

puts

individual one step ahead than ordinary

one but

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one, but

without practice and proper method of teaching they won't be able to exploit that. Because talents will neither be effective nor be

prodcutive

producing or capable of producing (especially abundantly)

productive

without hardworking. To recapitulate, though talent is an additional gift

that is

assistin

give help or assistance; be of service

assisting

existing

associating

but in some

way but

Accept comma addition

way, but

deligence

conscientiousness in paying proper attention to a task; giving the degree of care required in a given situation

diligence

is

aslo

in addition

also

crucial to be successful in life.