It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is thought by some people that, talent help individual to be successful in the area like sports and music while others believe that with effective teaching method and practice anyone can be a better athlete and musician. Both views will be analysed and opinion will be provided at the end. On the one hand, it is undeniable that, some people born with some certain talents which differentiate them with other who are trying to be better and who already become successful. These natural instinct help
individual
Suggestion
individuals
overcome some stage while others find it very difficult to pass.
For example
, there are some techniques that can't be taught doesn't matter how qualified a mentor is or how frequently a person practice.
On the other hand
, our education system based on a way that every individual can be taught things equally and effectively. Hardworking and regular exercise can take a student to the peak of the success and we have plenty of evidence to support that view.
For instance
, many pupils are successful today because of precise guidance and their perseverance. In my opinion, there is no doubt that natural instinct puts individual one step ahead than ordinary one, but without practice and proper method of teaching they won't be able to exploit that. Because talents will neither be effective nor be productive without hardworking. To recapitulate, though talent is an additional gift
that is
assisting but in some way, but diligence is
also
crucial to be successful in life. So both talents and hardworking is equally important.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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