Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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as film stars, pop musicians or sports can make a lot of

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to themselves. It is often argued that why entertainer jobs are paid too much

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. While, other types of work cannot make

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highly at the same. It can be seen that, firm stars, pop musicians or sports stars, they have to practise hard and have to use a highly attention

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of working is the best. While some people work with jobs which need not to try doing.

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people should not be paid too much

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However some

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other types of career may be paying too much

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on account of high risk work.

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of all, entertainers are paid too much

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in order to they have to make people relax or feel better while those people are still with them.

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, before entertainers will be stars, they have to practise and try to learn about their activities.

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, we cannot refuse why they should be highly paid. Meanwhile, other types of career may receive a lot of wage or may not get much

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is that difficult or easy to task and risky to task.

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, if we do a high risk job, we will receive much

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. While, we do a low risky production, we should get

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less than a risky production because the severity of failure of risky task is higher. In conclusion, it can be seen that not only entertainer jobs will be paid too much

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risky jobs. Every jobs have their values or range of paid, If we need to get too much wage, we should do industry

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eligible.