Some people believe that online learning is very effective for students and that they can learn more easily than in the classroom while other people believe studying in a classroom with other students is much better. Which group do you agree with? Why?

No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of learning within the corona virus pandemic, which made people think that distance learning is better than the old traditional manner in education, whilst, others stand in firm opposition to
this
claim. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely adopt online learning. It is my firm belief that paying attention to lectures on the internet is much better than sitting in the
class
and seeing the professor explain topics for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, managing
time
is a significant factor for a successful life. When you attend online sessions you do not have to walk from building to another to catch up your classes and waste your
time
.
However
, sitting in front of your device would gain you
time
. I have to admit that my opinion on
this
matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, before the covid-19 happened I was studying in the university and I had to take some
time
to move from
class
to another
this
made me feeling tired,
thus
, I needed to take rest and had my lunch, which made me lose some effective
time
to achieve some tasks, while, with these obstacles are going in the world that force us to stay at home I got plenty of
time
for resting and doing double the works I did in the university.
As a result
, stress decreased and my grades increased. For
this
reason I would prefer to educate at home.
Secondly
, all students have opportunities to participate in the
class
, especially, for those who, feeling shy to share their answers in the lecture. Drawing from my own experience, in the campus, specifically in the seminar we used to discuss some essential subjects during the
class
. A friend of mine, her name is Fatima. She is an unnoticeable girl because she never talks in the
class
and if she had a question to ask she would prefer to keep it for herself and explore the answer by herself because of her innate and shyness. But, now behind the screen she starts to talk to the professor and ask for help if she wants.
Moreover
, her existence is markable now and she is gaining the trust of professors. It is certainly clear to see why educate in campus rejected choice for some people,
furthermore
, it might be a good step for loving the learning. In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that studying at home can lead us to the right way,
such
as, creating an effective agenda for preserving
time
and working in the
class
without thinking of consequences.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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