It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Some people believe that teaching
children
at a young age to make differences between good and wrong acts is highly recommended, and punishment can be a good way to let them understand. I totally agree with this
belief as unpleasant experiences can provide an effective way for children
to know their boundaries.
First of all, toddlers are fast learners, therefore
, it is not a huge issue to teach them. They learn immediately from their surroundings. If at a younger age, they could be directed to the good path and let themself connect the bad acts to the uncomfortable feelings, as they are growing up, they automatically can behave rightly in a difficult situation. For instance
, parents can limit the TV time or postpone the game time based on the children
’s performances. If a child brings home a bad mark from school, parents can oblige the child to practice more.
Moreover
, at school, teachers also
try to find suitable methods to punish bad-mannered students. Of course not with force. As far as I know, violence does not help to solve any problem and in most cases, it brings adverse effects. Therefore
, nowadays in China, teachers have not been allowed to use physical penalties anymore since around 2000. Such
as in Hungarian middle schools children
receive black points after bad manners and earn red points for excellent behavior or answers.
To sum up
, all children
are different, hence
, there might be different methods needed. Self-discipline children
realize very quickly how to behave right after the first time they get punished. Needless to say, there can not be a perfect punishment for bad acts. Whether parents or teachers should apply penalties carefully and consciously.Submitted by chfannimr on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Ensure a clear thesis statement is presented in the introduction to provide a clear stance on the topic from the beginning.
task achievement
Expand on your main points by providing more detailed examples and explanations that illustrate your arguments more vividly.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain a logical structure by clearly separating your ideas into paragraphs with one main idea per paragraph, supported by examples or explanations.
coherence and cohesion
Enhance the linkage between ideas by using a wider range of cohesive devices and transition words to guide the reader through your argument more smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
Consider reinforcing your conclusion by summarizing your main points and reiterating your stance on the topic, making sure it is aligned with your thesis statement.