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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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With the development of the nation, social networking is
also
 becoming more and more popular with every kind of age. Believed by some that, social networking site has a large negative impact on individuals and society as well. I think there are good and bad site of social networking.
To begin
 with, our age is the global age where one person can talk to another person even if they are far from each other. Social networking sites help people to connect with each other.
For example
, A son living in a foreign can communicate with his mother through social media. Social media or social networking sites bring hope to that mother and joy knowing her child is doing well.
However
, not only
this
 person can know each other through social media. In the times of emergency, social media can able to collect funds, manpower and gather ideas which help the society of the world.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
Social networking sites have
also
 its drawback by on how you use it. For examples, people use fake id's to defame other if they have a grudge against them. In the recent case in Nepal, 3 people were killed because one boy from lower caste have fallen in love with high caste girl through social media and the villagers killed them. It shows that, it not only affected the life of an individual but
also
 the society.
Finally
, I think social media or networking sites is creating awareness and providing a helping hand to the people and at the same time, it has some negative aspect too. In conclusion, there are two sides of a coin. If good exist,
thenthen
Suggestion
then then
 the bad
also
. Same way, social networking site has both advantages and disadvantage and its up to people how they use it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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