Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to thank you for the memorable
valentine’s
night which was created Capitalize word
Valentine’s
last
week by your outstanding service and delicious food.
I hope this
letter find
you well. Change the verb form
finds
Last
week, I and my wife were at your restaurant to celebrate the
Correct article usage
apply
valentine
night. I would like to Capitalize word
Valentine
appreciate
for providing us with great food, Verb problem
thank you
salad
bar Correct article usage
a salad
in particular
, and also
valuable service.
Let me explain the great atmosphere in more detail, both professional
staff and Correct article usage
the professional
music
band that Correct article usage
the music
gravely
Add a missing verb
was gravely
casted
, was really helpful to build an enjoyable memory for us. Correct your spelling
cast
In addition
, the floral decoration was marvel
.
Add an article
a marvel
Although
there was no negative point to complain about, I think dedicating a special area for kids to play with each other can enhance the amenities of the restaurant.
Thanks again for your outdo services, I hope to visit your restaurant in near
future.
Yours faithfully
Ali ACorrect article usage
the near
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Task Achievement
To improve task response, try to elaborate more on each point you mention. For instance, you could provide specific examples or details about what made the food outstanding and how the service contributed to the enjoyment of your visit.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, consider more varied sentence structures and more explicit connections between ideas to enhance fluidity. Using transitional phrases can help guide the reader through your points more seamlessly.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite