Write about the following topic: Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Development of

child

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the child

a child

starts early in life, in

fact it

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fact, it

found that 70% of brain development completes at an

age

of 7 years in

majority

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the majority

of children.

This

creates the dilemma that where one should teach

small

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small children

a small child

child

at

home

or at schools at

such

tender

age

.

First i

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First, I

First I

would like to discuss the pros of providing the

education

at

home

rather than at schools.

at

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At

home we

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home, we

have a familiar

faces

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face

around so

child

will feel more confident and relax.

This

makes a huge difference in the efficiency and effectiveness of the

child

when performing any function. There is no time limit to study at

home

so the kids can learn various tasks when they are energetic, happy and willing.

Secondly now

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Secondly, now

let us look at the other side of the discussion

that is

providing

education

from the

school

.

Child

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The child

A child

will learn

qualities

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the qualities

like sharing, caring and discipline. Pupils are likely to become

more social

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more socially

and responsible in their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

by studying in

school environment

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the school environment

a school environment

school environments

. Another very good aspect of

school

education

is children tend to become more punctual in nature.

Lastly i

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Lastly, I

Lastly I

would like to give my opinion on the subject. I think providing the

school

education

from the early

age

is of paramount importance in these competitive times. In schools they have not only professional and well qualified

teachers but

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teachers, but

also

sophisticate equipment and tools to provide the required knowledge in a right manner.

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

have my own experience of

my both

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both my children

my both children

child

going to

school

at

early

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an early age

the early age

age

where they

uses

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use

audio and visuals to impart teaching.

most

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Most

of all my children are now more competent than ever before and

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am very satisfied

by

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with

my decision