Some believe the primary purpose of museums is to entertain people, while others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Dear Mr. Ahmed, Hi, how are you? I hope that you are good, I am still fine. How is your summer holiday?
Last
month,
I have been Thailand,
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I was in Thailand,
I was Thailand,
and I have had a great deal of wonderful things. Here, I want to tell you about my experience in Thailand. I went to golden temple land with my 3 friends. We planned our schedule rather than tourist
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
. I
have travelled
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travelled
in
this
place for 5 days. I stayed in Bangkok for 2 days and Chiang Mai for 3 days. Due of saving money, we caught a later flight to Bangkok. Directly, when we took off the landing, we had called hotelier to give us;
however
, they didn’t receive a phone from us. We had to find another accommodation near there. Unfortunately, it took about 1 hour to look for a
homestay
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Homestay
homestead
, and we
also
paid the driver
tuk
carry out
take
talk
took
tuk
exchange thoughts; talk with
talk
take
to 1,300 Bath,
this
amount was too expensive. Tomorrow morning, we
came
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will come
to the hotel in which we booked before. In Bangkok, we had visited The Grand Palace. It had attached me by famous architects, the palaces looked at luxury.
Besides
, I
also
went to MOCA - the museum of Contemporary in Bangkok, I saw it on Instagram; so that I fairly keen on it. Many pictures brought me interesting in because they told me about love stories;
in addition
, I extremely fond of customer of Thailander. In the evening, we had a walk around the Khaosan road. We enjoyed a lot of street food, after that we went to massage, it made us more comfortable after walking a long-distance. In the following days, we had been Chiang Mai. We visited some the places in here,
such
as white temple,
bule
(astrology) a person who is born while the sun is in Taurus
Bull
temple, back house,
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those were popular and beautiful temples.
Hence
, I went to a long-neck village, these women had a very long neck and they wore many necklaces. The
last
exciting place that was golden triangle,
this
area located between the borders of Laos, Thailand and Myanmar and in the past,
this
place used to produce the biggest opium in the world. Before we came back home, I had gone some supermarkets to purchase presents for family and friend. After travelling, I’m so happy and gain more knowledge to
this
country, and if I have an opportunity, I will go to Thailand once again. Looking forward to meet you soon. Best regards,
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