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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

#people #colleges #universities #experiences #career #preparation
Nowadays, there has been an immense competition to get admission to top-notch colleges or universities in the world. Various types of tests/ exams/ interviews conducted every year to assess student's
knowledge
 and capabilities. There are many factors why people are continually striving to get admission in good and reputed colleges/ universities.
First
 of all, by joining
college
Suggestion
the college
, students experience new things
such
 as working in a diverse environment because, in colleges/ universities, students come from all over the globe.
This
 experience lets them learn about different cultures, languages, and customs, etc. Colleges and universities focus more on practical
knowledge
 rather than theoretical
knowledge
, which again helps students to expand their
knowledge
. Students work in groups most of the time, which helps them in brainstorming ideas, developing leadership qualities, learning to negotiate with others, team- coordination, patience, improving soft skills, and so on.
In addition
 to
this
, colleges and universities help students in every phase from choosing their career path to preparing them for
job
 interviews.
College
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The college
 conducts multiple mock sessions before a
job
 interview in order to help students to brush up their soft skills like communication, personality, confidence etc. Top-notch universities
such
 as
oxford
a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner
Oxford
,
mit
,
stanford
a university in California
Stanford
 have notable and famous alumni networks, including Sunder Pichai
(
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Google CEO), Indra Nooyi
(
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(
Pepsi CEO), Warren Buffet, and so on. These universities' branded names on the CV are more than enough to get a good
job
 offer because the interviewer is aware of the fact that only highly intelligent and
multitalented
 people get admission to these universities.
However
, some people join college/ university as a symbol of social status. Their main aim is to let the world know that they are educated. People consider higher Education as the status they require to get a higher position in society. In conclusion, Education, getting a good
job
, a good lifestyle, new experience, and improving social status are the main reason for people to attend college universities.
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