Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages or disadvantages of television for children.

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Nowadays, kids spend most of their hours on

TV set

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a TV set

the TV set

, whereas in

past they

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the past, they

the past they

were much more

attackted

direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes

attracted

towards other

activites

any specific behavior

activities

. Technology is playing a vital role in an individual's life, detrimental as well as incremental.

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, while watching television have a detrimental impact on infant, there are advantages as well, in increasing children's IQ level. There are many advantages, if your kid is watching television in a discipline way.

Firstly

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, there are many digital channels which are full of knowledge, there are

series

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a series

of new inventions and innovations on

few channels

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a few channels

documantries

writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)

documents

of very well known people.

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, in a

servey it

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survey, it

survey it

was found that, children (10 to 18 years old) who spend more hours on watching discovery and

natgeo

inform (somebody) of something

notify

channel's episodes, are more knowledgeable than others in their classroom.

Moreover

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TV set

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the TV set

a TV set

is a great device, more and more children are attracted towards it,

this

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habit is

good but

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good, but

only if they are spending time on knowledge gaining area, rather than watching Cartoon. Disadvantages of Television for children are.

Firstly

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, children

are

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very familiar with the character or cartoon they watch, due to spending

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

two

much hours on

television they

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television, they

start co-relating it with their real life.

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, it is found that, watching action movies on digital screen make them loose anger easily. To illustrate, in the USA two kids use to live with their parents at a high rise building and jumped from 16th floor balcony and died.

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investigation it

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investigation, it

was found that

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they jumped in seek of

supernatarual

not existing in nature or subject to explanation according to natural laws; not physical or material

supernatural

power will come and catch them and save them.

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, watching horror movies or unrealistic movie and stories will

definatly

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

affect kids brain, they are not that sensible to understand the difference between real fake. In conclusion, I would say that, watching

TV set

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the TV set

regular basis

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a regular basis

may increase insecurity for parents. Children spending

hours followed

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hours, followed

by proper timetable and parents keeping eye on

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

infact

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in fact

, may decrease tension between parents.

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Topic Vocabulary:

educational programs
diverse cultures
entertainment options
language skills
critical thinking
social awareness
shared experience
sedentary lifestyle
inappropriate content
academic performance
attention problems
social skills
commercial influence
addiction

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages or disadvantages of television for children.

Your opinion

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