Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. what problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Nowadays more
and more senior generation Accept comma addition
Nowadays, more
tend
to be prevailing part of people living in rural Suggestion
tends
areas whereas
youngsters are largely moving to big cities. Though there might be justified reasons for Accept comma addition
areas, whereas
this
, such
motion may cause several problems which will be discussed in my essay as well as possible solutions to overcome these issues.
To begin
with, it is important to understand why young people do not want to stay in their hometowns and choose big city life instead
. One potential reason for this
is that they believe city
is the way to Suggestion
the city
better life
. It is commonly the truth, that Suggestion
a better life
better lives
finances
of Suggestion
the finances
aerarium
is devoted not evenly. Suggestion
the aerodrome
aerodrome
an aerodrome
Government
pays more attention and investment in amendment of capital and big cities. Suggestion
The government
Such
improvement positively affects not only living standards, but education quality and further
career step up opportunity of urban areas while rural remain apart.
From psychological part of view, it is naturally
for people to find the best option for the future though Suggestion
natural
such
resettlement has some negative consequences. It increases
already existing competition between Suggestion
increased
has increased
people which
is Accept comma addition
people, which
then
not a hole some competition, but a survival. The good
Suggestion
The best
example presenting
the situation would be educational establishments which accept Accept comma addition
example, presenting
certain number
of students every year. At the same time the number of students pretending on one seat increases Suggestion
a certain number
accordingly
to the growth of number of students applied. If a student from rural area
would be accepted, other precedents will lose their chance to study, yet that student could continue his education in his hometown whereas his urban competitors won’t.
Additional to Suggestion
a rural area
rural areas
this
, moving from countryside to town strips the growth of rural areas. As well denuding countryside
qualified specialists, and youngsters representing the future generation, there is no development not only these Suggestion
the countryside
places but
the state which is considered as a whole system. So, there cannot be any development if all strength is agglomerated unequally and punctually only in big cities.
Despite all negative effects above Accept comma addition
places, but
such
policy is very popular though the consequences may not be noticed momentously. It is better to take charge of this
and change the situation. The best and only way though
which tackles the problem completely would be efficient government actions. If finances, which is by means of; with aid of; through the act or agency of; "destroyed by fire"
through
improvement today’s
leading engine, would be divided evenly or according to demand to hold Accept comma addition
improvement, today’s
areas whether
rural or urban on the same level, so young people from Accept comma addition
areas, whether
countryside
could receive same quality education as youngsters living in cities, there won’t be rural-to-urban motion towards Suggestion
the countryside
better life
.
To sum up, though there are strong reasons for young people moving from their hometowns, mostly bushes, the situation can be taken in hand and improved.Suggestion
a better life
better lives
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