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( Do you agree or disagree with the following statement : It's a good idea to send homework assignments for students during summer breaks) examples and reasons.

#idea #homework #assignments #students #summer #breaks
Evaluation is an important part of modern education system,
Such
 as by doing weekly test, assigning topic related extra work
this
 all may give students the extra knowledge of the subject.
However
, some people deem that providing extra study works to adolescents during their vacation.
Thus
, I
stronlgy
with strength or in a strong manner
strongly
 agree with the given phenomenon, As that may improve their skills.
For instance
, a reading, a writing and so on.
Firstly
, The most valuable part of
this
 exercise is it helps to boost their academic grades.
For example
, some students are weak in some subjects, So vacation is the
time
 where they can give some extra
time
 to develop skills in that subject.
Moreover
, assignments help them to revise their study as well, which ultimately help them to achieve their target score.
Furthermore
, Some teachers
also gives
Suggestion
also give
are also given
 assignments which are not related to their academic subjects.
Such
 as, reading some novels, Write a diary about their day to day activities.
As a result
, it may help to improve skills of reading and writing, Which are very useful for their studies.
For example
, I would like to give my own experience. When I was in my school my tutor gives me tasked to make a collection of article based on environmental problem which published in the newspaper.
As a result
, I regularly read the newspaper and whatever article contains information related to it, I cut it and put on file, Which improve my reading skills and
also
 got more knowledge about the environment.
On the other hand
, Some people deem that vacation is
time
 for playing games and giving extra work makes the burden on children and spoil their free
time
. In conclusion, I reiterate that holidays gives student to explore other thing and enjoy their childhood. But extra work may
also
 help them to get more information which helps them in their academic
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
careers
.
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