Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally . Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

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Considered by many people that, all the countries shall come together to find the
solution
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for
enironmental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
issues, while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
believes
thats
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that's
a nation should handle it on its own.
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, while all the nations, individually trying to tackle these disasters, I believe that all the nations shall be united and find the
solution
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of these environmental problems. Finding a
solution
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on international platform will allow
us to find
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us to find a solution
solution
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even faster.
Firstly
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, problems like ozone layer
depelition
the act of decreasing something markedly
depletion
or increasing level of carbon in
air
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the air
, all these issues are neither caused by only one country nor only one country will suffer.
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, all the nations will suffer with
this
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.
Secondly
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, we are still burning non
rewenable
that can be renewed or extended
renewable
fossil fuels to generate electricity in power generating plants.
For example
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, 85% of the electricity generated on the earth
is
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are
by
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from
burning
fossi
characteristic of a fossil
fossil
fuels, which
addons
(Greek mythology) a handsome youth loved by both Aphrodite and Persephone
Adonis
0.5% increment in the carbon every year.
Thus
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, we have to shift towards using
rewenable
that can be renewed or extended
renewable
reseources
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
, like sun and wind, earth have
abondant
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an abundance
abundance
abundant
of these resources.
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, while working globally to find a
solution
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of a problem, we will be able to work with more experience scientists, have hands on more researches and will be able to get
result
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results
faster.
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, if all the nation follows a protocol and start finding a
solution
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, swine flu, the best doctors and scientist from all over the world get together to do research in search of a vaccine. In conclusion, working as a team with global leaders can fast tract the
solution
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of the global pandemic. I agree, environmental issues shall be
solve
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solved
globally, including
powerfull
having great power or force or potency or effect
powerful
international countries, by creating a committee. We together can solve many issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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