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Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others, however, disagree and say that music is merely a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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It is true that rich variety of
music
style
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styles
 can be found all around the world.
Music
 has to play an important
role
 in
society
on the other hand
 it
also
 brings enter
entertainment
 to people. So
this
 essay would discuss both the views of people.
music
Suggestion
Music
 is something that helps to solve various problem in the
society
. It plays a major
role
 in bringing people of different culture together. As by listening
music
 people develop
feeling
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a feeling
the feeling
feelings
 of brotherhood. It
also
 helps to resolve various ongoing
conflict
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conflicts
 in the
society
. It
also
 helps to reduce stress, depression and other health problems in the
society
 as
music
 is
source
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a source
the source
 of medicine to many mental health problems. It
also reduce
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also reduces
has also reduced
 anger among the people through which it plays an important
role
 in the
society
. Each and every
things
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thing
 in
this
 world provides
entertainment
 in some or the other way to people.
Music
 is
also
 a source of
entertainment
to
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for
 many people. By listening to the
music
 many people become happy and start enjoying
there
of them or themselves
their
surrondings
the environmental condition
surroundings
 things. That’s why in many
function
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functions
 like marriage, birthday
celebration etc.
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celebration, etc.
there
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There
 is presence of DJ’s as it makes the environment happy and
enjoyfull
. Whenever a person is nervous or is in
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
 condition than in that situation they prefer to listen
music
 as it entertains them and help them to recover from
such
 situation. Many
music
composer
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composers
 compose
music
 just for the
entertainment
 of the people. To sum up,
music
 has both the elements present in it as it can play an important
role
 in the
society
 and it can
also
entertainment
Suggestion
entertain
 the people at the same time. So
music
 is considered to be an important part of life.
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