Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while other think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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is
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kind of skills which sometimes given by god and
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we obtain by doing hard work on it as well. Children have their own creative and different mind
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They can express by an
art
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it is
one
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kind off to pull off the creativity of the
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's mind. Here
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would like to discuss about to
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What
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subject
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can be implanted as
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in children's school or not.
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point of view different
child
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has their own interest in a particular activity like sports, karate, gymnastics, study
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invention, drawing, music and so on. The
art
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has different form that
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I
mentioned ago, so it
is depend
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depends
on
mindset
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the mindset
of a particular
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a young person of either sex
child
child child
. These day governments should give interest in the essential
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of
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in schools.
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art
the products of human creativity; works of art collectively
Art
can help
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with
children express their ideas, thoughts and
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increase their creativity too. There are main two
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subject
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subjects
of
art
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are in the schools nowadays.
it
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is music and drawing
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these subjects are common in schools. There is
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idiom is that " a
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who can learn or understand things better than teenagers" mean it is an age of to learn quickly.
if
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If
you get younger than you have been taking more time for learning
art
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. In childhood there is a
no tation
a technical system of symbols used to represent special things
notation
about any things so they can easily understand and grasp anything like an
art
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. So it is very, very important and essence the
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of
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art since in
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art since
childhood. Now the other point of view we can say that if a
childchild
a young person of either sex
child
child child
is not interested in any kind of
art
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that it is worst about that
child
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.
but
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But
as per my knowledge very
child
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has their own interest in doing a particular field like some children has interests in sports
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acting, innovating or so
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so these statements are going to wrong on
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type
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argument. At the
concussion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to agree with the
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is as
a
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an
essential
subject
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in school is
best
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the best
decision, but the other hand, I would like to say about that children who does not like
art
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so there is
a
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an
option for that
children
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child
to select another
subject
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or other activity that they would like to do in school
.
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