A growing number of people feel that animals should exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some, the sharing of their opinion about animals
shuoldn’t
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shouldn’t
couldn’t
have any free
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
or they only to be needed for eating and
experiment
Suggestion
the experiment
is
negative
Suggestion
a negative way
the negative way
way
of thinking, whereas others believe
this
kind of
reccomandation
something (as a course of action) that is recommended as advisable
recommendation
should not be shared due to its value and importance. The best
way
of choosing these two opinions is individual analysing.
This
essay will discuss, any sides of two different thoughts. It’s true that nowadays most people still believe that animals are dependent themselves. We live in an age when many of us are developing our
knowledgements
. In my opinion, it is one of the
worth
Suggestion
worthiest
way
of making a decision before knowing the history. Many years ago the technology wasn’t
aviable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
for personality, there were only animals which can help them with anyways.
For example
, herbivorous animals could make it easy to bring
anything to
Accept comma addition
anything, to
anywhere or people used dogs for analysing the
thiefs
a criminal who takes property belonging to someone else with the intention of keeping it or selling it
thieves
thief's
in lots of
agency
Suggestion
agencies
. Getting back to now, it is still true
way
of humans. If people save their consistent to using animals only for researching or for any
experients it
Accept comma addition
experiments, it
experiments it
experience it
would bring a big problem to the world that we live.
This
problem
wuold
past tense of "will"
would
be a decreasing of animals. I strongly disagree with that.
However
, if we strictly limit their freedom or rights we can’t save them as more as we want.
On the other hand
, we live in the development of high technology and after all it would perfectly change to the virtual life by
this
way
. In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, people should save the natural
live
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life
and should teach it
for
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to
childs
a young person of either sex
children
. I would
also
advise in any cases, everything should save its
naturality
Accept comma addition
neutrality, then
neutrality then
naturally then
then
there will be
improvement
Suggestion
an improvement
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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