With increasing population communicating via internet and text messaging face to face communication will become thing of past. To what extent do you agree?

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, the way in which we communicate with each other has changed drastically. Today, more and more people are using

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the internet

and texting as a mode of connection as it is easy, effective and fast. But I disagree that

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contact will be a thing of the past as in it, the values, bonding, sharing, relations are made stronger as compared to any other form of communications. Due to invention of

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the world wide web

, the way of conversation has changed exponentially in recent years. Nowadays one can talk, text, video call to anyone at that particular instance and all

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is because of technology.

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, if one wants to call somebody in different countries, they can call via web by a

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can see their

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with it and

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was not possible a few years back.

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, people can make and socialize with many people at a time with the help of texting via Facebook, Linkedin, gmail. All these are possible because of advancement in communication technology.

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, no matter how much there is advancement in technology of communication,

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contact will never be out of date and I think it will be back in trend. The reason for

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, internet intelligence can't give you the feeling of bonds, touch, emotions, celebrations, living and enjoying the moment,

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all these feelings are important as a human being.

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, there are many cases of depression as there is less human contact, people have thousands of friends on Facebook, millions of followers on

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, but they are useless when one is in trouble.

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communications will never be outdated. To conclude, internet & texting form of communications has made things possible which were not before, but it can never replace the importance of direct connection will individually as emotion is attached to it.

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