You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
l am writing with regard to your advertisement in Star newspaper on
last
week according to
hiring a home English language teacher for your children. My name is Ali Saremi and, I am 28 years old, graduated from Oxford University 4 years ago in the field of English language teaching.I was a main member of a big language society that is
called CS LT.I achieved a high degree with excellent scores. It is necessary to say I have 10 years of experience in that major. Therefore
, I am confident that my skills and experiences are proportional to this
matter.
On the other hand
, I am interested in math too, so I am ready to teach math and I will not want any extra money for this
,
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math too.
I would like to visit Australia and it has been my big wish since I was a child.
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,
I want to Remove the comma
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new experiences in Australia, and your country is full of Correct your spelling
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groundworks
for my progress.
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Finally
, I look forward to your reply as soon as possible. Feel free to contact me if you have more questions. My phone number is 123456. Thank you very much for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Ali SaremiSubmitted by aksoysana on
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coherence
Consider further organizing information into separate paragraphs for clarity, such as details about your qualifications, additional offers, and reasons for interest.
writing tone
Ensure consistent use of formal language, although the current tone is largely appropriate. Avoid colloquial expressions like "it has been my big wish."
task achievement
You have provided a compelling response that covers all the required points: suitability for the job, additional skills, and personal motivation.
writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and professional tone throughout, which is suitable for this type of correspondence.
coherence
The letter is generally well-organized with a clear introduction and conclusion.