NOWADAYS PEOPLE ARE IMMIGRATING TO DEVELOPED WORLD. DISCUSS ITS REASONS AND STATE ITS CONSEQUENCES

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IMMIGRATION HAS BECOME A COMMON PHENOMENON NOWADAYS AS SIGNIFICANT NUMBER OF PEOPLE FROM DEVELOPING COUNTRIES ARE MIGRATING TO INDUSTRIALISED WORLD

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AS GERMANY, CANADA, AND USA.

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REPORT WILL ADDRESS CAUSES ALONG WITH CONSEQUENECES OF

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BORDER CROSSING.

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OF ALL, PEOPLE LEAVE THEIR MOTHERLAND MAINLY BECAUSE OF THEIR STRONG DESIRE OF BETTER LIVING STANDARD AS WELL AS IMPROVED WORK-LIFE BALANCE. RESULTANTLY, PEOPLE TRY TO ENTER EUROPE IN MULTIFARIOUS WAYS EVEN BY CROSSING MEDITERRAIN SEA, AND OBVIOUSLY

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OCCURANCE WILL UPSHOT THE INFLUX OF PEOPLE IN DEVELOPED COUNTRIES, WHICH SUFFER BADLY FROM DEMOGRAPHIC CRISIS.

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, RECENTLY, SEVERAL COUNTRIES, GERMANY, CANADA, HAVE INTRODUCED POLICIES WITH A VIEW TO ATTRACTING SKILLED LABOUR FORCE ALONG WITH MERITORIOUS STUDENTS IN THEIR LAND.

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STANCE DEFINITELY ELUCIDATES THAT exodus IS NOT A BLESSING FOR THEM.

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, SOMETIMES PEOPLE ARE FORCED TO LEAVE THEIR COUNTRY BEHIND BECAUSE OF WAR, EXTREME POVERTY AS WELL AS POLITICAL CRISIS.

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, A NUMEROUS NUMBER OF RESIDENTS OF WAR TORN AREA, SYRIA, TUNISIA, SOUTH SUDAN HAS UNDERTAKEN SEVERAL MEANS IN ORDER TO DESERT THEIR BIRTHPLACE AND REACH A COUNTRY WITH A STRONG ECONOMY ESPECIALLY ENGLAND, PORTUGAL, ITALY AND SO ON.

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, NO MEASURE EXCEPT ENDING OF WAR WILL DISSUADES

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PEOPLE FROM DOING

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DAUNTING TASK.

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, migration HAS SEVERAL PITFALLS TOO AS THESE MASSES MOSTLY WITH IMPROPER COMMUNICATION SKILL COULD NOT AFFORD A JOB, AND

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THEY ENGAGE THEMSELVES IN ANTI SOCIAL ACTIVITIES

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AS THEFT, PICKPOCKETING, AND BURGLERY.

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, FEEDING

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EXTRA POPULATION ACTS LIKE A BURDEN ON HOST COUNTRY PROVIDED THAT THEY MAINTAIN REFUGEE CAMP.

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, IN ORDER TO FEED ROHINGA PEOPLE IN BANGALDESH, AUTHORITY SPENT A VAST SUM OF MONEY. ADDITIVELY,

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COMMUNITY ENGAGE THEM IN SEVERAL TYPES OF ILLICIT ACTIVITIES

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AS DRUG TRAFFICKING, RAPE, MURDER ETC. IN CONCLUSION, INTERNATIONAL COMMUNTIY ALONG WITH CONGLOMERATES

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AS UN, UNHCR SHOULD IMPLEMENT PRGMATIC STEPS WITH A VIEW TO PUTTING AN END TO

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CRISIS. WITHOUT PARTICIPATION OF ALL,

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PREDICAMENT CAN NOT BE CURED.

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NOWADAYS PEOPLE ARE IMMIGRATING TO DEVELOPED WORLD. DISCUSS ITS REASONS AND STATE ITS CONSEQUENCES

Some people believe that art plays a crucial role in society, while others think it is a luxury. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in the history of the house or the building they live in what are the reason for this? how can they research this?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?