An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain where did you find this information why you want to apply this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply Write on this topic
Dear Sir/Madam,
I Kulbeer Kaur Bal, am writing a letter to apply for a job. I recently read in a newspaper that you need staff for your company and I was cherished to saw it because I was really looking for the work I needed for months. As I'm well experienced in the computer engineering field I would like to apply for a job.
So, I have done my high school diploma in science from Podar Institute which is situated in south Bombay and from the same institute I have passed 4 years of computer engineering. I have knowledge about computer topics like creating codes, bulleting, data entry and many more. With my experience and knowledge, I will be working hard for your company and as I told you I have been searching for months because it's my dream job and I really want to get into it.
I would like to apply for a data analyst position in your company. Please give me a call once you receive my letter. I will be waiting for a positive response from you.
Thanks & Regards,
Kulbeer Kaur
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task achievement
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
You've done well in introducing your intention and why you're interested in the job.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate, providing a professional tone. Well done!
coherence cohesion
You managed to structure your letter logically, making it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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