You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Landlord,
I am Sathihs Raghumani, living with my family at 207 of the 5th building
in
Greenway Road. I am writing to inform you that the Dishwasher in my kitchen has not working since we relocated and I would like to change the washing machine and dryer.
When we moved to Change preposition
on
this
apartment a week ago we were busy setting up things and when we started operating the dishwasher we found that it was not operating properly, and we were forced to wash all the dishes in hand which is more time-consuming.
I would like to get an upgraded one which will be noiseless and convenient for me compared to the old one.
I hope you understand the problems that we are facing. Therefore
I would like you to provide me with assistance to solve the problems as soon as possible.
Thank you and Have a great day!
Yours faithfully,
Sathish RaghumaniSubmitted by insighttribez on
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coherence cohesion
Consider addressing all the furniture issues you're facing more clearly in distinct paragraphs to ensure each problem is individually highlighted.
task achievement
Be more specific about what immediate action you would like the landlord to take, such as providing a timeline for replacing or repairing the dishwasher and other appliances.
task achievement
Your tone is polite and suitable for writing to a landlord, which is very important in formal letter writing.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear opening and closing, which helps in making your request clear.