You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Landlord, I am Sathihs Raghumani, living with my family at 207 of the 5th building

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Greenway Road. I am writing to inform you that the Dishwasher in my kitchen has not working since we relocated and I would like to change the washing machine and dryer. When we moved to

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apartment a week ago we were busy setting up things and when we started operating the dishwasher we found that it was not operating properly, and we were forced to wash all the dishes in hand which is more time-consuming. I would like to get an upgraded one which will be noiseless and convenient for me compared to the old one. I hope you understand the problems that we are facing.

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I would like you to provide me with assistance to solve the problems as soon as possible. Thank you and Have a great day! Yours faithfully, Sathish Raghumani

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coherence cohesion

Consider addressing all the furniture issues you're facing more clearly in distinct paragraphs to ensure each problem is individually highlighted.

task achievement

Be more specific about what immediate action you would like the landlord to take, such as providing a timeline for replacing or repairing the dishwasher and other appliances.

task achievement

Your tone is polite and suitable for writing to a landlord, which is very important in formal letter writing.

coherence cohesion

Your letter has a clear opening and closing, which helps in making your request clear.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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