Some people are happy to spend the whole of their life living in the same area. However, others prefer to live in many different areas over their lifetime. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some people feel
bleesed
highly favored or fortunate (as e.g. by divine grace)
blessed
pleased
and cheerful when they get an opportunity to live in various parts of the world
;
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;
however others
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however, others
are happy to live in the same
place
in their life.
in
Suggestion
In
my point of view
,
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,
it is vital to learn about different cultures and places to make our life joyful. On the
one
hand, people migrate from
one
place
to another as they are keen to learn and acquire knowledge about
sevral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
cultural and lifestyle aspects.
Moreover
, exploring various lands and meeting people from
differnt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
cultural backgrounds is the hobby of many
adventurer
Suggestion
adventurous
people. Professionals who lack existing
opprtinties
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
of jobs in their own country are likely to migrate to developed countries where there is demand of skilled people like them
such
as
Canda
a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
and USA.
On the other hand
, there are many people who reside in
one
area only.
this
Suggestion
This
is because they do not want to leave their comfort zone as many formalities and arrangements are
reqiured
necessary for relief or supply
required
recorded
if
shifiting
continuously varying
shifting
sifting
is
envolved
connected by participation or association or use
involved
.
people
Suggestion
People
living in the same area can build stronger bonds towards their community and neighbours. People who have lived in the same
place
for long, develop a social responsibility towards their society, which helps in the overall development of the community. Along with the society the people
also
develop a closer bond with their family, as they live together all their life. In conclusion, there are merits and demerits to staying in
one
place
and frequently changing the
place
of residence. In my opinion, people who seek new experiences and challenges are the ones who keep moving from
place
to another
.
Accept space
.
those
Suggestion
Those
who
love comfort
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love, comfort
and familiarity
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
most probably will most probably live in the same
place
throughout
thir
of them or themselves
their
there
lives.
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