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The given line chart gives information about how many children’s books, adult’s books and educational books were sold in a nation during the period from 2002 to 2006. Overall, it can be seen that there was an upward trend in the consumption of children’s books and educational books
,
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,
the opposite was true for
these
plural of that
those
of adult’s fictions. Looking
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more detailed information, the selling of children’s books and educational books stood at approximately 35 and 25
million
dollars in 2002 but there were sharp growth for both of them to 42 and 32
million
dollars respectively in 2003. From 2003 to 2005, the consumption of children’s books witnessed a gradual increase of 46
million
dollars, while a remarkable fall of 25
million
dollars was seen in the selling of educational books. In the year 2006, the figure for both of them were significant rise and hit the highest point of 55
million
dollars with children’s books. In
constract
the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared
contrast
contract
constructed
, there was a significant fall in the sales of adult’s fictions. It dropped from the highest point of 45
million
dollars in 2002 to 35
million
dollars in 2003. Despite declining rapidly, the sales of adult’s fictions increased slightly to 40
million
dollars in the
next
year. The figure declined to nearly 30
million
dollars in 2005 and
then
continued to drop more noticeably hit the slowest point of 30
million
dollars.
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