Nowadays, most large companies operate multinationally. To what extent those companies should have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate?

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a great trend of offshore expansion of large corporations.

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this

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trend will create many

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for the local citizens,

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their

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responsibility

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towards

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highest level. It is true that the responsible corporate behaviours contribute to broad-based benefits towards the countries in which they are active.

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, since these corporations have had the responsibility towards the habitat, which

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to beliefs of the local people

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in

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these brands.

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, if a company have steps to

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of wastes

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the citizens enjoy their new products without concerns

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environment

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the environment

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.

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, the multinational

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should be more active in charitable activities that

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provide

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opportunities for them to save

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lives

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. In fact, many nations all around the world do not have the resources to deal with the problems,

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as poverty or hunger, so they need a lot of

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companies

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.

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, the foreign

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can substantially benefit from being socially responsible. By actively protecting the habitat that ensures their sustainable long-term growth, especially

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in manufacturing

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and mining factories.

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, the

coca-cola

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company had many campaigns

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climate

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,

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they

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received

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supports

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from the locals and

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.

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, the multinational corporations should be very conscious of their track records when it comes to local responsibility, as these are directly tied to brand names.

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, if the brand name is

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and

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, which is

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conductive

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to increasing the profit and sales. In conclusion,

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multinational operational

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create many benefits for local communities,

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I still believe that the responsibilities towards

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the environment

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still are

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the highest because of the above-mentioned reasons.